Stain
Daniel Henney
Ariel Lin
Yoon Eun-Hye
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And Daniel trying to move forward with his life by accepting Eun-Hye lunch invitation....oooh how could he?
And you answer the question about Sarah and Daniel relation..
Oh my god second meeting Ariel and Daniel is way too short...greedy of me hehehhe
You put a nice but painfull cliffhanger to end the story...right now i really can not wait for your update...
And I want to laugh because Daniel completely forgeting Eun Hye and their lunch date...He just run toward Ariel....Nice way lover boy hahahahaha
@greenleaves: yes, daniel accepted YEH's offer. he's a man after all. ha ha. pls stay tuned!
i was really disappointed when my previous a/c went cuckoo. had to make this new one again. but i really hope that you guys can continue reading this fic of mine, and enjoy. thanks a lot for the support. hugs.
I think its going to be interesting what Eun-Hye's reaction will be when she finds out that Daniel run on her. Can't wait for your upcoming updates
was he able to stop the elevator and speak to Ariel?
wanting to find out!!!!update please!!!
You know what the serious, mature and cool Daniel change completely when he has to face something considering Ariel...hmmmm i wonder why or not? :) :) is it love?
Right now I will wait patiently untill Daniel meet with Ariel....I think the journey untill they meet again is quite interesting....
And thanks for updating so soon...really apreciate that :) :)
It's worth waiting untill Daniel meet Ariel...hehehe...
I think elevator will become memorable place for Daniel and Ariel :) :)
I can sense Euh Hye will prepare the war with Ariel, and try to win Daniel
Ariel Fighting....
BTW, did Ariel ever return Daniel's jacket? Its been a month at least.
thank you
@Guest @ 162.119.64.100: i could be posting in the middle of next week. ha ha. stay tuned.
@Guest @ 72.235.246.90: soon. :p
@Guest @ 162.119.64.100: ha ha! we'll see.
I realize it maybe because their relationship in past that make them a lot to rethink to open up with new relationship...
And about Eun Hye, I think she is not a bad girl...or not yet? Sometimes I pity her...
Please up date soon, with a long chapter...is that too much to ask? hohohoho
update soon!!
the previous chapter was really short. i dont know why i didnt realise. haha. really sorry all of you.
And I like Sarah, with her inocence she give a lot opportunities for Daniel and Ariel to improve their relationship. Good Girl :) :)
In the end of chapter...I think Eun Hye starting to realize that she underestimate Ariel huh?...and what is it in 19th floor????
Request to robotbunny please...please, me with my thickfaced hehehehe, can you give us bonus chapter to accompany us this weekend...me demanding reader :) :)
@Guest @ 99.240.118.100: yes, daniel's the man! and thank YOU for reading too. appreciated.
yes!!!! give us a bonus>>>>
PLEASE!!!
I have a question robotbunny,when will you tell us more about Ash? I assume he is a man from Ariel past, that make Ariel want to commited suicide, and who made fate for Ariel to meet Daniel...
And...cute and funny Sarah, running away and hide to man's toilet? that's scary hehehhe
Ooops almost forget...thank you for grant our requst for a bonus chapter,it's ok if next chapter a little bit late, as long as it is loooong chapter....demanding again :) :)
@Guest @ 99.240.118.100: greedy? no you're not. you're just excited. haha. you guys are making me even more excited! yes, i will post as soon as i can. thanks for the support. :D
And Ariel too, finally open herself a little...that's good.
Hohohoho, you turn Eun Hye become a stalker.
Two lonely people find each other and have a second chance...so romantic...hiihihihihi
And Daniel take Ariel home? Wow, he already make up his mind? to pursue Ariel in smooth and gentle way hehehehhe
You talk about Ash a little, i wait patiently untill you told us about Ash more, like you said patience is a virtue :) :)
And, thanks robotbunny to finally update your fanfic with 2 chapter :) :) :)
love it....
@Guest @ 72.235.246.86: thanks to you too. :)
@Guest @ 99.240.118.100: more more more soon! :p
waiting to your chap 19 tomorrow!!!!!!
And please robotbunny I'm begging you don't make Ariel and Daniel relationship which started to bloom return to zero point again...please...please
I seem lost in track reading chapter 18...who is the man with the ray ban? Is he ASH...????
And Thank you robotbunny for updating today...waiting curiously for chapter 19
Now they might never get together if ariel thinks that daniel is still married...
what's happenning????
Ariel gives Daniel's cold shoulder....
Daniel still unsure about his feeling and how to make a move toward Ariel...
Daniel had a lunch with Hye Kyo...
A mysterious man making appearence...
Wow it will make story interesting like LOVE FIVE SQUARE (how do we call it "pentangle" or "tetrangle"...geez I'm rumbling here...just ignore)
....But I still have a hope for Ariel and Daniel...like wall's painting on Sunday...maybe Daniel will take Sarah there...greenleaves daydreaming....hehehehhe
Finally, thank you for updating even in your bussy schedule :) :) ...And congrats to your 1000 readers....
go and see his house, then you'll know that he is no longer married.
Just say yes Ariel...follow what your heart told you...
Thanks for updating...:) :)
@Guest @ 162.119.68.249: hahaha. yes, Ariel. go!
@greenleaves: a progress, but slow nonetheless. i hope that all of you will be able to wait. i like to tease. haha.
And evil me, won't stop laughing for Eun Hye...poor girl
Wow and you will update the next chapter in 5 hours? Waaaaah thank you so much....
Ahhhh, I have a feeling that you will grant my wishes that Daniel will take Sarah on Sunday's painting day....hehhehehe
I don't know why but I feel the suspense will come in your next chapter...man from France? I wonder who is he...I have a feeling who is he, but I will keep it myself untill you reveal it by yourself...no pressure :) :)
I like the progress between Ariel and Daniel...slowly but sure hihihiii...
And thank you for updating so soon :) :)
so ash is back.. daniel better work quickly!!
In Daniel's side, he must move quickly because Ash is finally return...
In Ariel's side, Eun Hye will try to destroy her still fragile relationship with Daniel...
I can see bloody war here in the next chapter hehehehe...oops I forget it's not a horor story but romance :) :)
thanks for the update
I like the way Ariel act when she met Ash face to face...determined lady...I don't know though inside her heart...but hey she didn't had nightmare anymore even after she knew that Ash return...that a good sign...
Is Ash's uncle Mr. Strohm? Hmmm I'm curious
And Thanks for update :) :)
what going to happen in 4hours and 55 minutes..
update soon.. maybe in 4 hours and 55 minutes..
nah..take your time, but make it soon-- don't leave us hanging...
daniel is going to be more confused when he meets ash... noooooooooooooo.....
so many question going thru my mind.
who will ariel pick??
can't wait for your next update!!
daniel will find out later that takeshi is ash.
then ash is going to find out that ariel is seeing daniel.. wow..
can't wait again for your update and thanks for updating!!!
Now I dont want to guess...I just want to wait patiently to know where will you bring the story go...
Ooooh what is the meaning of "Manna"? Is it like amullet or something?
And...thanks for updating :) :)
Greenleaves and Guest @ 99.240.118.100, you are very welcome.
I'm getting excited myself too. Manna is something unexpected and very welcomed or beneficial. (:
Hope it helps.
Eun Hye...really desperate...god this woman...when she will realize that Daniel doesn't fancy her at ll...
Takeshi...ooooh why robotbunny...you make this super handsome man become so clueless and little bit annoyed...huhuhhuhuhuu....What he really want from Ariel, after he left her without a glance...a warm wellcome hug...god get real man...ckckck
And thanks for your update...:) :)
ariel- u are starting to fall for daniel..friends do become lovers.
daniel- work faster...
ash- i feel sorry for your..why did u leave???
wanting more!!!!
Guest @ 72.235.246.86, YEH is very bold. she knows what she wants.
I like this part:looked at her and extended his hand carefully to move away a few strands of hair on her face. Yes, he wanted to be closer to her but he did not want to scare her away with his actions. They were like his instincts-- he had no control over them.
and this part: pulling out another piece of tissue from her tote, helping him wipe off the glossiness from his forehead. He was lying when he told her he was used to it. Ariel paid deep attention as she wiped his forehead and then to his temple, then the bridge of his long nose, his sharp jaw and finally to the top of his lips.
very romantic!!!!
Aaaww...I have big smile when reading your last part chapter...Superman always help you Ariel...
I just hope Rainie already go to Thai for vacation...so Daniel had to take Ariel to his house hihihihihi:) :)
and hopefully this will change relationship between Ariel and Daniel from platonic into romantic :) :)
and thanks for update :) :)
so he got a GF since he thought ariel was happy --right...
but why did he leave in the first place (he said he had no choice). why didn't he have a choice???
I hope rainie is not home---- take her to your house Daniel!!!!
thanks for the update.. waiting for more!!!
I am so into your story...so many quesstions???
yep, the story's moving and i hope all of you are enjoying every moment of it.
most of you are really analytical, it's so cool to have you guys as readers. and and and, you really have to wait to find out about Ash. see you soon!
I'm wondering if i should add one more chapter. ha ha. Lemme go flip my coin.
Finally the reason why Ash left Ariel...Now, I feel difficult to have symphaty for him, but he still has guts to pursue Ariel again? ckckckck
Come to think, maybe Ash is man's version of Eun Hye hehehhee, very persistent...
Now I convince myself that Daniel is in love with Ariel, only he doesnt realize yet...and so does Ariel to Daniel :) :)I will wait patiently untill both of them realize their feeling for each other hehehhe...and when is that robotbunny? hehehhehe
Thanks for updating :) :)
more please!!!!
Sooooo..melted....me....
love is in the air!!!
waiting for an update!!!soon!!! thank you!!!
i hope it helps.
thank you for making me excited to post every single time. ha ha. Ariel and Daniel and Ash and Eun-Hye are all hyped up too. I can't wait for the next chapter myself even. Give me time.(:
lots of love, robotbunny.
Please make Daniel running after Ariel,their relationship already at important phase,dont make their relationship return to zero again...I am really begging you...Ihiiiiiks I really want to cry now...:) :)
And thank you for your painful update hehehehhe, my heart still bleeding
i'm crying like Daniel with my hands on my face, thinking---why!!!!!!!
ariel-- daniel made the choice to want you not YEH so don't run away from daniel.
robotbunny -- you're killing us..
will be waiting for next update. hope soon!!!
need an update. please!!!!
~lyly
but i'm going crazy like Eun-hye!!!!
darn ariel=== give daniel a chance=== your breaking my heart!!!
You really good making me held my breath everytime I read your story, especially when it is a part that consist Ariel and Daniel....and the scene in elevator...wow...wow...wow...I can not ask more, definitely there is still hope for their relationship. They couldn't hold on any longer, their heart will lead the way :) :)
And I believe that you will post chapter 31 tomorrow...hehehhehe If not I will go crazy...Thanks for your update...
You know what, after thinking a little...I dont mind if the kiss will take in the end of your story, as long as they follow what their heart told them...
And now you add up more spice to your story...Eun Hye problem not solved yet...and dum...dum...dum...Ash come to the picture trying to get our attention...
This is my first time following story in the internet like this, usually I just become a silent reader, but because your story, I decide to become a little active reader, give comments here and there...I even save your story in my laptop hehehhehe
Oh ya...Let me intoduce myself...I'm Indonesian,you know Bali is part of Indonesia...geez what am I talking here? hehehhehe I'm glad that I came accros with your story here...
Oh god sorry...I tend to talk too much when I'm in a good mood :) :)
Thanks for always updating your story regularly...
And wave too all regular reader of robotbunny'story...nice to meet you...Senang berkenalan dengan kalian semua (this is Indonesian language)
daniel knows that it was ash who left ariel...
ash knows that daniel is the other man....
wonder if ash is going to punch daniel--like what ariel was thinking the night before??
i'm really enjoying how you creating your story....can't get enough...hoping for an update soon...
me....i am from HAWAII-the island of OAHU..
i enjoy reading any ariel story and it does not matter who she is paired with...although i love joe and ariel together in stories and but it would be even better if they were together in real life (just a side thought--ooops)...
i too usually don't post but you have drawn me post and get involve.
I just love it..so please continue and don't ever think of dropping this story and the other one your developing...okay.... ^___^
THANKS A BUNCH!!!!!!!
and nichkhun is cute hehe
Wow you come from Brunei, we are neighbour then...
Thanks for updating your story, please post next chapter ASAP :) :)
update soon!!
looking forward to an update!!
thanks!!
yeah, patience is a virtue indeed. that's why i'm really thankful to all of u for being so patient. it's quite a long way to go for this story and I hope I could get all of u glued onto your seats. kidding. :p
au revoir, mon amis.
Eun Hye should know when to stop...the love that Eun Hye feel is so unhealthy...and I dont think it is love, it become an obsession and little bit scary for me hehehehhe...
And Rainie died? I never thought you will kill her...but I think it was needed for your storyline?
And you good playing with your word...I thought Ariel will call Ash, when she think "only one who know my feeling right now", in the end it is Daniel...I feel so relief hehehehhehe, and little bit ashamed or myself because I don't trust Ariel enough that she really love Daniel...
Finally thank you for updating, take your time... I dont want to rush you anymore, like you said patient is a virtue :) :)
they both finally admitted vocally that they had fallen in love with each other... so sweet....
and i thought ariel called ash as well but it was daniel that she called and able to know her real feeling..it was mama yang that called ash...i was thinking..what!
and had to really fast cause i wanted to know the ending of this chapter..
i am going to re-read it slowly this time and relish the lovey dovey scenes!!!
thanks for the update!!!
will be waiting...plz don't take too long!!!!
that's why what i wrote above did not make sense..
what i meant was i read too fast and skip some areas because i was really curious!!
love your update--again thank you!!!!!
~lyly
wonder who the heck interrupt them?!?!?hihi
Call me crazy, but I still dont want Rainie died, so hopefully someone who rang the bell is Rainie, she survive for accident...but I dont think so?...too much imagination hehehhehe
And...thanks for update :) :)
i guess the kiss will be next time and ariel won't even have to ask nor will it be just a peck on the lip...
at that time it'll be really sweet and heavenly....
thanks for updating!!!!!!!!!
@greenleaves: spoiler alert. nope. it's not rainie. she's really passed away. really sorry.
@Guest @ 99.240.118.100: oh my. this story has a long way to go. is that place really remote? i would want u to be able to finish reading this! there has to be a way.
@Guest @ 162.119.68.248: ha ha. sighhhh.
@swimfishyswim06: welcome aboard! and i'm glad u love this story. stay tuned for the upcoming chapters. (:
I think your next chapter will show us the streght of Daniel and Ariel Love to handle all obstacle around them...Hopefully they will succeed with the test of love untill the end of the story, because they already become stain to each other heart :) :)...Just my premonition hehehehe
And of course thanks for your update..:) :)
daniel is such a gentleman...
huh..what is he hungry for that is not sold outside??? more kisses.....
waiting for your update!!!!
thank you
just waiting patiently for an update...
thanks
3 chapters...Thank you!!!!
ariel loves daniel but seems to be pushing him to YEH.....not good........
Thank you for 3 chapters...that's really a gift for us...
I just confuse with Ariel, what she need to prove...that she didnt deserve Daniel?
And...again with Daniel...oh so gentlement style...and then what, because of that now Takeshi took turn to grab Ariel...go..go..go..go Daniel...your cute pineapple cupcake already in the mouth of Takeshi...
~lyly
~lyly
what i want to convey is Ariel's feelings. i really want to put all of you in ariel's shoes. and maybe i couldnt capture all of you, but it's just a wish. ha ha.
kay then. that's all. gonna update soon. promise. (:
Sorry robotbunny...I think I still can not put myself into Ariel shoes, I just dont get that...I'm really bad here...ihiiiks...sorry if I sound rude...
And thanks for your 2 chapters update...hopefully in the next chapter Ariel will meet Daniel...and Daniel will grab and kiss her...I'm in a dreamland here hehehehehe.
please hurry and update!!
i want to know what is going to happen at the ball.....
daniel is so sad...
Mr. Strohm told daniel to let her go??!!- maybe he is doing a reverse psychology??
ariel's dress is so plain and YEH's dress--wow--
love your stories..
i hope daniel will just grab ariel and give her a long kiss!!!
thanks for updating!!!!!!
and now may I scream...wow...wow...wow....happy dance...the kiss..the kiss..the first real kiss,i'll bring those kiss into my dreamland...
Thank you for update and good luck with your study robotbunny :) :)
:)
I'm trying my best to squeeze in time. Til then, tahh!
Hope Ash wont do stupid thing too, just admit defeat gracefully hehehehehe :) :)
Thanks robotbunny for updating considering your busy schedule...
ash finally sees that ariel found someone else...
YEH still can't face the fact that she lost to ariel.....
thanks for update...worth the wai!t!!!
Ash finally understands that Ariel is with Daniel, but YEH is still angry. i hope that she isn't gonna do anything harsh to try to break up Daniel and Ariel
Ravwharr!
and i thank you too for taking a
time out of ur hectic studies just
to update this fanfic. But I'm
hanging upside down right now.
I'm confuse... hehehe. a part
of me wants daniel to barge in
and save Ariel and a little tiny
part of me wants Ariel to choose
Ash just to avoid complexity...
Ahhhh... I don't know...
what's gonna happen next?
I think all of the characters have uncertainty with their feeling...their feeling so undecide...it make the story interesting...after reading chapter 43, I feel I dont need a happy ending for Daniel and Ariel's love story...just the nature take their course...robotbunny if you decide to make this story has a happy ending I will be the happiest person alive, but if you decide to make a sad ending...it's OK I can accept that hehehehhehe
And again thanks for updating your story...tardiness?????what tardiness???? I didnt notice that hehehehe, your story is worth waiting and it become my ritual everyday to check your update :) :)
ash has to many ifs...i feel sad for him...
daniel i hope your lurking around ariel's place..
don't be tempted ariel....
Hope it helped to clarify your doubt. (:
And for Eun Hye...I feel pity for her, she doesnt know when to admit defeat...so selfish...my oh my.. robotbunny why did you make her very unlikeable? not like Ash...hehehehehe...i still like Ash, because he is more mature to deal his relationship with Ariel
And Daniel...waah you make him like a saint hehehehe. How I wish I can make delivery order a man like Daniel...crazy....
And claps for Ariel, finally made up her mind only for one man...Daniel...
And thanks for updating robotbunny...realy appreciate that...hope it isnt disturbing your study :) :)
thank you
It is perceived that guys like Daniel (THE daniel in this story, that is. Hopefully he's like that in real life too. Cross our fingers!) are extinct in this world. But we have to believe that there are a few left, and they are rare. It is fate.
My reason for making Daniel as he is in this story is due to the fact that girls/ladies like the idea of a man who actually understands them. And this is what I want to project. Just to let all of you have a taste of what an ideal man may/may not be.
I am happy that all of you are liking this story. Thank you very much. And no, this the update hasn't abrupted my studies. It's all well.
I have a good news and a bad news though.
Bad news first: Further updates for Ferveur (for those who read it) will not be available anymore. In short, I will not continue that story.
GOOD NEWS IS: I have a new story in mind, but it is not confirmed yet. Whatever the case is, Stain will be completed.
That's all then. Hahaha. Have a good day/night, all! (:
I'm sad that u won't finish Ferveur..can u maybe make it short-get them together, then end it.....
if its okay with you...
i feel sorry for Ash.. i'm glad he realize that taking away what don't belong to him won't make ariel happy..
OMG....daniel is such an understanding man..
he is so much in love with ariel.. love him...
Eun Hye...no more words for this woman...give me a headache hehehhe
and it's time for love for Daniel and Ariel...they still have long journey infront of them...hope they can survive :) :)
...and always my thanks for you robotbunny for updating this story..
YEH can't get it thru her thick get that daniel is not interested in her..i hope she don't do anything to harm ariel....
takeshi knows when to give way...so that's a good thing....
thank you for the two bonus chapters!!!!
please continue to update :)
Oh well I hope you can make Ariel more confidence with her relationship with Daniel...I suppose it was natural for the insecure feeling she had... who wouldnt... Daniel get everything what a man want to catch a woman hehehehhe...so it make him the most eligible bachelor...I want a man like Daniel for myself too hehehehhe
Thanks robotbunny for updating your chapter...I almost have heart attack when I first read the title of your chapter "appology"...I thought you want to appologize because you cant continue your story...silly me :) :)
YEH is trying to be friendly with Daniel..so she can win him back....
come on ariel..daniel loves you..don't feel bad about YEH...you won his love....
thanks for reading my fanfic eventhough i rarely update it nowadays due to time contraints. i'm sorry. but i am happy to know that i still have readers. ha ha ha. and very welcome to those who thank me. i should be the one to thank you guys for reading and commenting instead!
much love, robotbunny.
...can't because that EH still haven't given up yet...
@LTabi♥: yeh will give up when she fels like it. :p and youre welcome.
But...in the end I'm proud of her to stand up like that infront of Eun Hye...show her gut...go girl...
and as always thank you robotbunny for updating your story...