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IN 2 U

"poster"IN 2 U  4th fic

 

 

Foreword

 

 

Destiny isn’t as simple as it seems

 

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Two lovers separated by a tragedy

 

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The new life brought two strangers together

 

Will the two hearts that promised to spend eternity…. And that will only beat for each other find it’s way back into each other’s arms??

 

Or will the tragedy end everything???

 

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It may be Faith

 

It may be Destiny

 

It may be a curse

 

Or… it may be another tragedy!

 

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Will the two hearts embrace their new life???

 

Or

 

Will their promise conquers all??

 

 

Featuring

 

Kim Jaejoong (DBSK)

Sandara Park (2NE1)

 

By lilies_009         grammar and typing errors  again... sorry.... as i've said.. i like telling stories.. but i ain't good... so yeah!!LOL

 before you read watch this and rate==>>> http://www.youtube.com/user/lilies0091   thanks and enjoy

Kim Jaejoong == Sandara Park= Jung Yunho

DBSK
Leeteik

101 comments



wittyabkter   (14-6-2009)
i will always luv JAEDY i think im liking this better than IN BETWEEN

**abk**
lilies_009   (14-6-2009)
ohhh... thanks abigail... aren't you liking IN BETWEEN?? hehe please give it a chance...
hahah ^-^

i'm a JaeDy fan myself... that's why i kept writing about them... haha
eicee   (14-6-2009)
weeeeeeee. . new JaeDy fanfic! awesome!!. .
Google   (14-6-2009)
Guest @ 121.96.241.157   (14-6-2009)
AAAAAHHHH! You started this already?! yay! I'm in love with all our fics, so I'm fin with you doing both fics. i adore your other story as well. Hmm, wonder why the doctor said those words... I sense something that will break those two apart, w/o them knowing,TT.TT The start was really good, I wanna know more about this~ Good luck with your stories~ Fighting! I'll be stalking two stories now then? Yipee!
Guest @ 71.142.217.176   (15-6-2009)
oh my greatness!!! i TOTALLY love this story more than IN BETWEEN!!! sorry but im not such a big fan of top... BUT i am with this one!!! in between was getting boring... sorry... its just that it seems too real... hahaha with all the company and such.. but im still reading it!! HAHAHA HURRY UP and post another OK!!!
Guest @ 71.142.217.176   (15-6-2009)
write one like "my perfect imaginary borfriend!!!" and "naked love"
Those two story are so awesome!!
Guest @ 125.212.113.104   (16-6-2009)
LOL! so this is what you meant by Dara's character being different... loves it, she's a bad girl, LOL! she knows how to fight, she's cunning and another thing she sure s dangerous to mess with, and I love that character. But I wanna know more about their so called "family business", what do they do when they got hold of the files, etc. jae is the top among the biggest businessmen right? so their paths will surely cross, sinc ethey are aiming to get him,but it wontbe easy, since Jae is a very smart guy and knows how to manipulate people i guess. I'm excited when they'll meet, i love how you made Jae hear her ooh so sexy laugh, LOL! Hmmm... his heart felt weird? nah Jae, it's more than that! LO!L Wonder what happened the operation though, so maybe this is the reason why their parents wanna break them apart, since their world just don't match~ ooh poor them. Nice chapter! keep it up!
lilies_009   (16-6-2009)
to all my readers... thank you for supporting this one...

Guest @ 125.212.113.104_ umm... about the operation thing... i think you got the story wrong... i don't want to spill it out...(coz i really want to make you guys wonder.. LOL sorry)

but read again the forewords.. something about the "new life or hearts... "..hehe if you get the clue... then don't tell the others.. haha....
my sweet lovah   (16-6-2009)
umm. actually...

i love your fanfic...


that's why i made a new fanfic...

tnx
wittyabkter   (16-6-2009)
i can foresee it .. i think you're aiming for the most sensitive emotions of people in this story .. i like it !

like star crossed lovers ! but i hope the ending will be a happy one ;]
Guest @ 125.212.113.60   (17-6-2009)
OMG! thanks for this, I think i get it now, after you mentioned to re-read the forewords, LOL! I think I have a pretty good idea, but don't worry I won't post it here, to keep others from guessing, i totally forgot about the "will the two hearts embrace their new lives" soo exciting! i love this~ i'm excited for the next chappie! It could be fate/ destiny, will history repeat itself? that question will be answered I guess in the later parts huh? LOL! But i'll sure keep an eye on this fic!
wittyabkter   (17-6-2009)
im feeling it .. i like it
Guest @ 121.96.240.13   (22-6-2009)
AAHHH! you updated! yay! OMG! Let the games begin, I think that JJ is having troubles with her heart as well, LOL! he must've wanting o go home too but can't resist Dara's charm! LOL! How will Dara seduce JJ? He's a hard taget, and it won't be easy for her either! LOL! lke the last line, "used to getting all the attention eh?" but he feels like he can't get any of hers, very bad Dara indeed, I like this game they're playing,LOL! Wonder who'll give in first.
so their so-called business is just a front, but the real deal is into a very risky business? Man, it is very risky indeed. waiting for your next chappie!
Guest @ 121.54.97.54   (22-6-2009)
“Ya! I swear…. If I was not a lesbian… You’d be so mine!....”

hahahaha! that was one hell of a pick up line! maybe i shud try using this one! argh. Dara is adorable. i can imagine her doing all the flirting

update soon lilies. cannot wait to read more
Guest @ 122.55.93.98   (25-6-2009)
hey gurl... pwahahaha... more more!!!!

Guest @ 121.96.245.218   (25-6-2009)
LOL! OMG! I was laughing the entire time, when Donghae was accusing Jae of being irresponsible and all, now, what will Dara say when they finaly meet, can't wait for that!
I actually had a feling Yoochunie swings that way too, LOL! him getting a boy too! LOL when Dara said that I was like hell no! not Micky! but oh well, what can you do.
This is gonna be fun, them two trying to get into each other, beating each other out, wonder how this whole ordeal will lay out!
Update soon! and oh! about other people stealing your work, that's just wrong, maybe you can send a message to the MOD in winglin or something to have that story deleted, good thing you posted your's with ORIGINAL written on it!
Fighting!
Guest @ 97.116.36.102   (26-6-2009)
This is getting so interesting!
Can't wait to read more.
What do they both have up their sleeves?
Who will win?
Please update more.
my sweet lovah   (26-6-2009)
love it!!!!

i'm so addicted !!!

please make more chapters!!!
Guest @ 122.55.93.98   (26-6-2009)
No.. please no yaoi..
your stalker can't stand yaoi...
LMAO...


you! -%$#%@!
finish this now...

you keep me wanting for more

lawls... just kidding dear...

mwuahugs
HowDareHee   (29-6-2009)
"WE WHAT?!?!?!?!?!" <-----------Oh i love this line too much! >__< XD
HowDareHee   (29-6-2009)
my first post was an understatement!!!

more more more!!! lol sorry for acting like a neglected child that hasn't been fed for daaaaaaaays but....

moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!! kekekeke... hee loves chuu and jaedy very much...
will lil jaedy be back?... kekekekekeke
Guest @ 121.96.244.235   (1-7-2009)
OMG! I love it! LoL ! why do I ave the feeling that this is more of Jae's interest than it is for her brother's sake, tsk tsk tsk, sneeky Jae~
oh NO! I wonder how her brother will react to this~ Her social life is doomed! for life LOL!
Though I would love them to be together, hmmm, i want it to be longer though, like make Jae longed for her a little bit more~ he can't always get what he wants that easiy all the time you know! LOL! I'm excited for your next update! Please doo update soon!
Guest @ 122.55.93.98   (3-7-2009)
unnie.. i will be away for two days...

i'm waiting for an update... before i leave

much love..
your dog
Guest @ 121.96.245.151   (5-7-2009)
OMG! you updated! yay! and 2 chapters too! yes!
I am lovin' every chappie! soo good!
and yes, Yunho and Sandy do look together too, actually Sandy has this charisma that she'll look good just with anyone especially with the DBSK boys/ bigbang perhaps, LOL! But yes, I love those YUNDY moments too! sad though how Dara don't know about it, or does she? I think she does,love how it's getting Jae jealous,and with Yunho being his bodyguard, it'll be even more exciting, yay! more of those scenes please! LOL!
And love how flirty and sexy Dara's character here, soo far from how dorky she is in real life and acts like a child most of the time very adorable indeed, LOL!
Hope you'll updates sooner! lvoe your stories!
YUNHO is one sexy beast too! LOL! can't believe i just said that and is one big competition for Jae, me likes it! LOL! tis will be fun!
Fighting!
sungrin/shane   (5-7-2009)
woah!!i really didn't expect the yundy...lols...nice one new couple..

love it..jae will make dara pregy..omg..

i really hoping for a new chaptie..


aja aja hwaiting.!!
Guest @ 97.116.54.177   (8-7-2009)
this is such a good story.
can't wait for more updates.
Guest @ 122.55.93.98   (9-7-2009)
unnie.. keke.. doing my daily stroll ..kekekeke

~hee

*waits for updates
Guest @ 203.87.208.90   (10-7-2009)
unnie.. you just killed the boredom out of me... kekeke

i'm all hyped now.. jaedy FTW!!!!
bbassha!
~your dog
Guest @ 121.96.242.218   (10-7-2009)
Lilies~ hello dear author! LOL! it's me sillyharts!
thanks for the update!
I love the new chappies~ LOL!
It is indeed not easy to convince her brothers, I mean, they too do mnd games, so they won;t let her go that easily especially since they treasure her a lot too!
Love the YUNDY and JAEDY love triangle going on, too bad, Dara is not aware of these guys feelings, LOL! It's funny when you think about it too~
Yunho is soo sweet towards her, such a protective oppa indeed, well to Dara that is, but to Yunho it's soo much more than that, Man! I'm geting confuse here, I do think they look hot too, but, -sigh- there's also Jaedy, LOL!
I love how Dara is taunting Jae, she really knows how to tease the guy eh?! LOL! he's always jealous, LOL! i love it when that happens, soo cute!
anyways, i can't wait for th next update, soo Yunho belongs to a prominent family too? not? okay i'll just wait. soo both changmin and yunho despise each other, but Yunho will be living in the Kim's house meanng they'd see each other often, oh the drama! LOL!
And Junsu what can i say, he is soo innocent, even in this fanfic, he's just soo happy to have a little kim in their house, ROFL!
Thanks again!
see you at YGS!LOL!
sungrin/shane   (10-7-2009)
unnie. .

darn!you're really great!
you've made my day once again!

im so driven crazy with your works!

first:yundy couple?hope not. .

then now!yun&&min!i smell mystery which adds to my ecstacy. . .yaoi would be nice. .lol!just joking!


.but unnie!i'm telling you!if this is going to be release as a movie!its gonna be a hell a box office hit!&&If a book, it'll be a bestseller of all the best!

.im not good in commenting. but but. . .you really drive me insane!


.we'll have a prelim exam about 3days from now, but here i am. .reading. .harhar,


aja unnie!saranghae!hwaiting
lilies_009   (10-7-2009)
@sillyharts... LOL ima see u at YGS...LOL
Yunho?? hmm... LOL i dunno.. i like Dara's character in here... really... even now she's so damn sexy on the pretty boy performance..i love u sillyharts..lol

@sungrin.shane.. au'r making me giggle... u'r sooo cute.. thanks for commenting... i'm glad u'r loving it... moveie?? book.?? LOL well i hope. darn... u'r not liking YunDy?? LOL i am... but don't worry i am still JaeDy biased...
Guest @ 97.116.44.165   (11-7-2009)
Finally a few new chapters.
Thank you so much for this story.
Please update more.
Guest @ 97.116.41.11   (18-7-2009)
Still patiently awaiting your updates.
Love this story!
phuongthaohuynh   (22-7-2009)
I love all your fics but this one is so far my favorite of all.Love Dara and Jae's character here ^^ Please update soon, I'm dead waiting here lol...
Btw, I begin to love Jaedy all thanks to your fics :)
rainy07   (4-8-2009)
love ur stories especially ur "perfect imaginary boyfriend" i lyk ur stories
Guest @ 124.106.119.208   (5-8-2009)
love it... i saw your site in youtube... then i said what the hek... i wanna read... so i did :D keep it up
sungrin/shane   (7-8-2009)
Wee!waited for so long thanks for the update!lol


leeteuk so cute!threatening everyone..lol..ugh i would be proud having such funny protective bro..lol


more!hehehe...aja unnie!
jade_angel   (7-8-2009)
...i like ur fanfic...thanks 4 commenting meh...
Guest @ 68.2.230.232   (7-8-2009)
update more! can't w8!
Guest @ 203.87.208.90   (9-8-2009)
what do you mean all blab?!?!

i see tension.. it's like you're up to something...
LOL

-dog
Guest @ 97.116.43.189   (12-8-2009)
Wow! It's been awhile.
I saw you posting on other fanfic sites but no updates.
I really enjoyed the new chapters.
It seems like I really like all three of your stories.
Please update when you can.
HowDareHee   (13-8-2009)
wow you're writing shorter updates now..
whether short or long.. i like it still

the POV switches actually works... since it's short.. scenes are threatened to be crammmed but since you used POVs it went out smoothly..
i really like tipay sunbae.. but gawd.. hahaha my eyes are tired. >__<
HowDareHee   (17-8-2009)
unnie.. the update.. hee is waiting...
=p

hahahahhaa i waited all night.. LOL..
oh.. but i'm not whining unnie.. i'm just expressing my anticipation and love for the future chappie ^^
sungrin/shane   (17-8-2009)
awww!clifhanger!

but but unnie! iloveyou!

thankyou for another update!

gurl!you leave me another ectacy to look for...

whew!jae so cute. .eager to have dara!pwahahaha


aja aja !
phuongthaohuynh   (17-8-2009)
Yay you finally updated with 2 chappies ^^ heheh I have to come here and check on this everyday but it's worth the wait :]I think chap 18 is really romantic and sweet too, totally love their hidden feelings toward each other, esp those cute acts of Jae. Please update SOON, I wanna read more romantic scenes and also some ups and downs. Love your story and I love you too <33
Guest @ 193.179.103.157   (17-8-2009)
wow..
2 new chapters.. <3
pls update soon..

^_____^
HowDareHee   (18-8-2009)
2 chappies.. so generous... hehehehe ^^ <3
oohhhhh... i am a perrrrrrv.... i love it .. hahahaha

more more more!!! nothing beats jaedy... there can only be jaedy... hohohohoho
sungrin/shane   (18-8-2009)
IT WORTH THE WAIT!
Guest @ 121.54.76.14   (18-8-2009)
its worth the wait..hahah! please update soon!!
Guest @ 97.116.55.144   (20-8-2009)
Whoa...thanks so much for the updates.
I've been waiting soo long.
It was worth the wait....hehehe

I'm sure that it will be a few more times...hehehe
I hope they figure out their love for each other before the baby is born.

Oh yeah, what about their marriage certificate and rings at the doctor's office? When will that come out? Will they ever get their memories back?

Please update more when you can.
Guest @ 120.28.197.163   (21-8-2009)
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh.... your making me blushed on this chappy! its really quiet different, considering its a love scene, its really the feelings they've kept for a long time that i feel...its cute and no pressure at all..
well actually i did gave comment to force you to make the next chappy...kekeke
no...im BEGGING you to post the next one, you sure is a great writer!!!
im wondering whats there reactions in the morning when they'd wake up...
loving your stories soooooo much...
Guest @ 121.54.76.14   (22-8-2009)
your story is really amazing!
can't wait for the next chapter so i'm BEGGING YOU!!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!
Guest @ 68.124.133.103   (23-8-2009)
Awh!! Poor baby... yuhno .. too bad lol... anyways! Your such a tease! Hahahaha stop teasing us and update whenever u fell llike it gosh! How dare you argh!! ''Angry readers!'' Hehehe update!! Loving it mx
lilies_009   (23-8-2009)
@Guest @ 68.124.133.103
OMGGGGG!!! i'm sorry...... waaahhhhh
now i'm getting scared... ohh please don't get mad... i'm working on it! LOL you don't want me to post a crappy chap do you? hahhaha forgive lilies ok... mwuaahhh i'll post a chap this eve... hahhaha i'm not promising though....
Guest @ 121.96.243.48   (23-8-2009)
Hey Lilies!!! Sorry for the late reply~
This is sillyharts~ It's been awhile since I last had a chat with you in YGS! Oh well, been really busy lately~
anyways, about the new chappies!! I love it!!
You and your Jaedy scenes are <333!
It's rare to find Jaedy these days considering they never have any interactions in real life, YET! take note on the YET! LOL!
The Jaedy fangirl in me just wanna see them, interact, and I mean very soon! LOL! can't help it!
With all these new shippings with Dara, oh well, Dara is very well-loved amongst the guys eh~ what can you do~
So, about the chappies, sorry got distracted~ LOL!
The last two chapters, were really a fun and exciting to read~
Them two and their teasing, it never gets old~
And I enjoy everytime they do~ Dara still though haven't really fallen for him but somehow Jae is starting to acknowledge that he does need her, more than he could ever imagine,and how selfish he will be just to keep her by his side~ awwww~
Dara on the other hand, I'm not quite sure yet since well, she did say that she dislike the guy, I wouldn't go as far as hate, since it's such a strong word, to do so, and I don't think she does~
She's more on to considering what she felt as lust rather than the possibility of LOVE, which is normal after all she barely know the guy~
It'll be interesting to see though, the love triangle between Jae, Yunho and Dara, and honestly I don't mind her ending up with Yunho too! LOL! I just think they too would make one Hot/Cute Couple Too, but don't mind me,LOL!
Jaedy still comes first so don't worry~ LOL!
I wonder if Dara knows that Yunho feels more than a brotherly love towards her, I would think like to think she does, and since she somehow mentioned about owing a lot to him, like he is special to her too, this relationship with him, can definitely cause jealousy towards Jae, and i like more drama, especially the jealous overprotective Jae over her Dara~ LOL!
Yunho is definitely one tough cookie to beat, especially since for now Dara will definitely side Yunho over him~ LOL!
and Yunho does love her too, but I do feel sad for him, so what did he do exactly that very night?
Did he take Dara's advice to put on some earphone/whatever just so he wouldn't hear anything? LOL!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Jae LOL! he's I'm too cool to do anything for her, but have prepared everything in less than 10 minutes,LOL!! Too excited are we?! LOL!
Fighting!! and Update sooN!
HowDareHee   (25-8-2009)
hahaha yunho to the rescue...

i like it... hahahaha ..

unnie is jjang <3
pinkpeony   (9-9-2009)
hello lilies! :)

why were you hiatus in soompi? hehehe..:) omg! you have to update this soon hun..im addicted to your fics..:D

kudos dear!

~Belle, aka knucklepink
Guest @ 70.24.147.252   (22-9-2009)
I love the suspense in ur fic. I want more
Guest @ 70.24.147.252   (23-9-2009)
That's mean towards Yunho putting him next to their room. She is so stupid and selfish, she thinks she is getting to Jae but she doesn't realize how hard it will be for Yunho especially when they start making that baby tehe. Personally I hate how my Joongie is treated by her in this story she's lucky he has feelings for her because she needs a b*tch slap.
lilies_009   (23-9-2009)
@@Guest @ 70.24.147.252
omo.. don't get too worked up.. hehe I'm sorry for pis^sing you off..
smile dear....
.
first off she doesn't know that YUnho likes her. she thought he only treats her like a sister...
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if she's selfish she wouldn't agree to Jaejoong's scam and she wont agree in getting married to Jae.
but since this is all she could do to help.. then she have to say yes...
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about Jaejoong... well... they started off the wrong foot... so that explains her feelings towards him...then it ticked her off when Jae did something to the park industry.. that's dara's family's company...but we know she likes him.. only that she didn't realize it yet..
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hehehe awww... i know everything seems so wrong at the moment... well... if everything about the story goes the right way... then everything will end so soon...
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To my other readers.. thank you for waiting patiently for my updates... please don't kill me.. hehe... i decided to finish In between first... hard lesson learned... don't start off another fic when you have an unfishied one... heheh but i decided to end In between soon... please wait for my update for In 2 u.. hehehe....
.
thank you guys
Guest @ 61.9.52.3   (6-10-2009)
oh hi... i started reading ur fanfic (In 2 U) and well its good i like this more than the first one i read (PIB) intriguing ang exciting... but i dont like the firts few part your making sandara like a bitch... i know that it is just a fiction but imagining sandara just like that its kind of dissapointing... but anyway i like your story... tell me when you update again... the sooner the better.... joke... hehehehe... i know a hard to be a writer....
jharmm   (6-10-2009)
im Guest @ 61.9.52.3, my name is jane.. i started reading fanfic again after 1 year past... i started readibg because im curios about this jeajoong and sandy thing... as if they know each other, or have they alreday met in real life?
i wonder why would it look like knowing that they on the same entertainment industry... i know korean entertainment is far more different than philippine industry... im searching the net on some article between this two... too bad i cant find anything...
lilies_009   (6-10-2009)
@Guest @ 61.9.52.3
hi there... thanks for reading... well you see every stories i make i make Dara's character different. i'm sorry for making her a flirt in here but that just how the story goes...
and yeah it is all fictional....
what Dara's character in In2u doesn't really depicts her in real life...
same goes with Jaejoong and Yunho or the rest of my characters....
i made top a rpist in PIB but that doesn't makle TOP a rapist in real life... hehe
but i definitely understand how you feel... it's just that i want Dara to be a hot vamp here....
i like playing with her character.... and being sweet and cute doesn't always work for me.... so yeah... i'm really sorry.
,
,
@jharmm ~
Sorry no personal interactions between Kim Jaejoong and Dara park yet....
JaeDy couple all just started from fanfiction stories....
only a few stories are up the net... so yeah....
i'm guessing they heard of each other since both are extremely popular....
but i know they haven't met yet or anything for that matter..
but i'm dying to hear news about them meeting.. wishing and praying that they will...
you know.,.. just to feed my JaeDy needs...
if that happens i'm GONNA DIE!
hahahhaha
pardon me... i'm just fangirling....
pinkpeony   (6-10-2009)
yah! lilies! LOL! why are there no updates? huhuhhuhu... i love this fic! LOL! YunHo is such a lovely character..so good a triangle for our JaeDy..LOL!
jharmm   (7-10-2009)
no its alright lilies_009.... i know that its only a fiction... your story in PEB is much of a twist...hehehe... now im waiting for your updates in your story IN 2 U, it intrigues me... the firts part of the story "the young couple who were in the accident, is it dara and jeajoong and they have amnesia?" or "the couple had died and their two hearts was transplant to dara and jeajoong?" that's why the promise meant "my hearts only beats for you...till eternity" the two hearts find each other again... (oooohhhh...sad...im crying...)hahahaha...
jharmm   (16-10-2009)
maybe confusing to others but to me its very cleared..... i think changmin ang yunho were connected to the past about the young couple who died in a car accident...

take of yourself lilies.... thanks for the updates...
Guest @ 120.28.246.197   (16-10-2009)
lol...im confuse too..but i love mysteries....
maybe its the reason why this is my favorite among ur fanfics...
but dnt get me wrong...love love all ur writings...
ok dear..plz rest a little longer for another long and great story next chappy...
me_hearts_2ne1   (16-10-2009)
yezz! an updated.. i've been waiting for this.. i wish you could updated more often 'coz i really like your story.. lilies_009 hwaiting!!!
Guest @ 58.71.10.181   (18-10-2009)
hwehehehe

hi unnie!!! ^^ <333

like the update.. it's reminiscent of yer previous chaps.. keekee..

hope to see your future updates soon <33

hee

and i'm excited for *zips mouth*
Guest @ 203.177.74.140   (21-10-2009)
i like it...femme fatale Dara ....i really like this....almost like reminds me of mafia...just more high class and less violent.
Guest @ 203.177.74.140   (21-10-2009)
hmmm....you know a lot about this underground business ha.....really this is a very smart fanfic...very intellectual...
Guest @ 203.177.74.140   (21-10-2009)
oh my gawd your good!!! my eyes already hurt from reading but i can't seem to stop...
Guest @ 203.177.74.140   (21-10-2009)
oh may gad oh may gad!!! this is super!!
really they should make a drama for this!! you're a freaking genius!!!
Guest @ 203.177.74.140   (21-10-2009)
the last thing i can say(before i go to bed)...this is good enough to make me finish all the chapters with just one sitting...(ack! my back aches and my eyes hurt already).
princesskai   (24-10-2009)
i love this more than in between... hehe

but i still love to read your stories :)
princesskai   (26-10-2009)
o gosh! can't wait to read the next chapter...:)
Guest @ 121.96.243.171   (27-10-2009)
Hi Lilies!!
it's me sillyharts!!
you finally updated the fic!! celebrates!! wohooo!
LOL! sorry about that. but i miss this fic! and this is one of my fave just because the story is really something new and the character of Dara here is soo lovable though she is being such a apin to Jae~ LOL! But I love that!
the new chapters just keep getting better and better! and the yet there are still a lot of things left unanswered, like what is Yunho and Changmin's past tha made them both hate each other's guts. and the secret that both jae and sandy have, when will they ever find out that they both got the couple's hearts and how will they react. will they think it's them who's really falling or is it because of the hearts that originally doesn't belong to them, for sure they will come to a point where they will think like that. but for now I love the confusion Jae has on his feelings towards Sandy. but I feel sad fro Yunho, he loves her too much to even sacrifice his own feelings just to make her feel safe, would love to see a fic of this two, though~ LOL! But yeah, how come dara doesn't know about his feelings for her? and LOL!@ how they almost got busted talking about Sandy, and aww.. I have a feeling Yunho might use the ticked one day, and I love how Dara feels that whenever his around she feels secure and safe,-sigh- maybe because he feels more than that dara? aish! one-sided love is really heartbreaking.
can't wait what will be the date jae has prepared, will dara finally see a different side of him? hmmm... will jae be sincere about it or not? I love a jealous Jae though,LOL! he's really cute and flirty Dara is the Bomb! LOL!
Update soon!
phuongthaohuynh   (28-10-2009)
Jae made his moves finally, so cute hehe ^^ I'm so curious about the next chapie,seem to be interesting >:D Update soon please,please,please !!! I can't get enough of your fic :D Love you lilies,
zebedee   (31-10-2009)
i think im the one having asthma attack in here!!!
at last im registered kkkk...having you as reason for visiting this site...
thanks lotz...that was intense...
i want another giddy moments kkk...pervy me!
i wish the whole story behind those hearts will be revealed clearly...
and dear plz update soon and make it long kkk..
phuongthaohuynh   (31-10-2009)
Sandy didn't need her inhaler but I do here, can't breathe lol too hot ^^ Glad that the 2 finally got closer to each other and more dramatic/romantic scenes are on the going. Please keep up the great work and update soon. Love ya!!
Guest @ 75.10.116.52   (31-10-2009)
Yes!! Thank you! More intenity chap likethis recent one..ahh!! I can't wait.... I usually wait for chap updates and read them all at once!! I love it! So many new ... how should I say it... uhmmss... idk but its really interested!! More like naked flower woot woot!! Wirte moore darling!! Don't let the shortoer get to u.. its just silient readrs hehehe (I'm one of them)!! Love lillie mucho muchos!!

Meex
pinkpeony   (4-11-2009)
hey lilies!

i cant seem to comment on Soompi..dunno why..so imma comment here..your love scenes are always well-written..hot, but loving at the same time..you're making me fall in love with JaeDy..LOL! thanks sweetie! update soon! mwah!

~belle, aka knucklepink
Guest @ 71.142.207.197   (5-11-2009)
i'll admit i had my doubts when i first started this,
but now i'm dying to know what happens next!!
^ ^ lol.
esp with the changmin/yunho episode.
update soon ^ ^
this is really good.
Guest @ 112.201.199.138   (5-11-2009)
Please continue...Thanks!
Guest @ 71.142.207.197   (6-11-2009)
oh man.
this is really intriguing me now.
i'm dying to know the connection.
because before it said that jaejoong remembered sandy's name as hannah.
and hannah's yunho's sister! o.0
so confused!!! need to read more!!
update soon ^ ^!!!
Guest @ 121.54.92.148   (6-11-2009)
great piece
Guest @ 120.28.251.82   (6-11-2009)
HI~bwahahha
zebedee   (6-11-2009)
your new chap is still good! you still have it dear kk..but~ i wanna know how are you these days...?after what happened to the three DBSK mmebers and rubbing salt to a wound...sm releases a statement from the other 2 members...and shinee boys letting themselves used...gaaaaaaaaaahhhh how are dear...be ok plz...
princesskai   (6-11-2009)
finally! you updated! wanna read the following chapters! :)
Guest @ 98.238.139.35   (10-11-2009)
girl you better write longer chaps!!! dont leave me hanging!! AHHH!!! hahahha i want to know more!!! i love this fanfic!!
phuongthaohuynh   (11-11-2009)
Ahhhh an update finally. Thanks so much lilies, please give us other chappies soon!!!
Hehehe I love how Jae could be all warm and cute around Sandy a while ago then suddenly changed into a totally stern and cold business man to deal with the problem. So cool!!! So powerful and professional too!!!
About the vote for YooSu, for me it's a NO cuz I'd rather saw them as dorky bestfriends :D
Guest @ 112.200.192.159   (11-11-2009)
as much as i love yoosu...it's hard to read something that gay about them...hehe
Guest @ 71.142.58.193   (11-11-2009)
so excited for the next chapter ^ ^
i'm still dying to know the whole Yunho/Hannah/Jaejoong thing~~ ^ ^
sungrin/shane   (12-11-2009)
LOL . I thought there will be. But I understand you.
It's hard to put up a yaoi couple in this type of story .

Love your updates unnie !!
Please update more !!
saranghae
Guest @ 70.173.182.50   (4 days ago)
HI Lilies, i`ve been reading your fanfics ( In2U, PIB,INbetween) , and i really like it! Thanks for choosing JAEJOONG and DARA as ur main character, I LoVe both of them! (^_^) and i think they will be a good match for real (^_^)
Guest @ 76.175.102.14   (4 days ago)
woah!! i love ur stories!!!
and i didnt go to school today because i wanna read all of ur stories and this one is not yet DONE!oh darn!! update please.. keep doing it
really love ur stories! hope you make more Jaedy stories in the future i will be loooooooking FORWARD D:
thanks!
Guest @ 208.54.5.74   (less than a day)
Triple nose bleeder !!<---- aHHH! Hahahaha keep it coming girl!! I nevr doubtd u!

Meex
Guest @ 61.9.52.4   (less than a day)
hey lilies_009, its me jharmm..

have you heard the news about the 3 members of TVXQ (Jeajoong, Mickey, Junsu) will attend the MNET awards to watch and greet their fans...

the 2NE1 will be performing in MNET awards and will also performing their solo's...

WOW.... the time will be waiting for has finally come...

the meeting of Sandara and Jeajoong in real life....

Lilies_009 your wish has finally come true... hope for the best to come....
phuongthaohuynh   (6 hours ago)
Your wish already came true lilies ^^ 2NE1 was the one who gave the award to JaeChunSu :D JaeDy officially met each other kyaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
Guest @ 115.147.192.237   (3 hours ago)
its me jharmm...

phuongthaohuynh is right... when i watch the show i think my heart will gonna explode eventhough its cl who gave the award to jeajoong.. still sandara was there.. smiling.... and saying congratulations to them...

aaahhhhhh... that was so nice..... im so excited for what will happen in the future....
lilies_009   (2 hours ago)
hey you guys...
i know i know..
waaah it could have been better if it was dara who gave the the award... maannnn

but wahh i didn't expect that DBSK will get an award plus it was 2ne1 who will actually give it to them....

how cool was that???

if dbsk and sment are in good terms the JaeDy meeting could have been better and longer... hahahha

mannn