Suki,
I read your TOB2 from teh link you gave below your signature!! hihih
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/TOB2/Here's some idea for re-writing ending for Kau Chong & Yuk Chi :
This happens right before Kau Chong & Chi Ling go to see LSMan.
Instead of actually "killing" the two guys, LSMan faked their death in front of everyone and decided to let the 2 guys escaped in underground "path" with promise that they should never reappear again in LSM' s kingdom.
So the Chi Ling & Kau Chong agreed. When they went back to their house to meet their friends Chi Ling saw Fuen Huen and they both decided to spend the rest of their life in monestary (like how the ending was in TOB serie). But Kau Chong finds out from his help (Han Chi) that Yuk Chi and Sau Ning were both forced by Thuc Ni to go to Palace. Kau Chong ran to the palace to find both Sau Ning & Yuk Chi on the floor. (They both had drank poison wine by Thuc Ni) Thuc Ni had already left the place thinking that Kau Chong had died and now she has finished killing both girls Kau Chong had love. Kau Chong & LSM both met again at same time and saw both ladies lying there in garden. LSM quikly ran up to his sister and try to awaken her, while Kau Chong ran to Yuk Chi holding her. Both men used all their kung-fu and saved the girls (luckily their came in time to save the poison from sinking in and was able to bring the poison back out). LSM asked Kau Chong if Yuk Chi was going to be OK. Kau Chong said yes, she will be fine. LSM then told Kau Chong to please take Yuk Chi away from the kingdom and find their happy lives together because he know Yuk Chi only love Kau Chong. Kau Chong agreed and thank LSM for sparing his life and promised to take good care of Yuk Chi.
LSM brought his sister back to the room and when she woke up she asked what happenend to Kau Chong, LSM told her that Kau Chong & Yuk Chi had left the kingdom already and shall never return so they will not get caught. Sau Ning wished all happiness for the couple as she is satisfied enough that both are still alive and well.
On the trip leaving the kingdom, Kau Chong took good care of Yuk Chi as she was stil unconscious. He ended up taking her to their house in the mountain. THe same place his god-mother had taken in him and Chi Ling when they first met. It was a secluded place where no one would find then and they can live the rest of their lives there together.
Yuk Chi still has not awaken from her poisoning and lying in bed. When she woke up she saw Kau Chong sleeping next to her bedrest. As soon as Kau Chong sense her moving he woke up and sat beside her.
YC : "Are you dead? Am I dead too ? Have we both gone to heaven??"
KC : "No silly, we are both very much alive." (Grabs her hands and place them on his chest) "Here feel my heart, and I am alive and well as you can see".
YC : (sits up and hugs KC really tight and cried) "I thought I'd never see you again. Thuc Ni told us if we drank the poison that you and Chi Ling will not be killed. I was so afraid and had no choice so I had drink the poison. Sister Sau Ning did too. (looks around) Oh where is Sister Sau Ning is she alive and welll ??
KC : (nodes and smile) "Yes, Sau Ning is well and is in the palace where she belongs. Her brother, who will be king, will take good care of her. "
YC : (suprised) "Where are we?? Are we not in the kingdom anymore?"
KC : "No we are not. We are now in a very secluded place, away from all the material world. " (holds YC's hand tightly and looked into her eyes) "YukChi, will you be alright living here with me for the rest of your life? Away from the material world, from your from luxery and servants ? I am now no one with no more power. Will you still stay by my side and be content with this lifestyle ?"
YC : (with tears bursting out of her eyes and smile) "Yes, of course. Do you think I am that spoil ?? I do not need anything else in the world as long as I am with you. (hugs KC again and lets her head rest on his chest) "Please do not ever leave me again and promise me to never lie to me again. No matter what happens from now on we will be truthful and honest with each other even when you are endanger? Promise me ?"
KC : "Yes, I have nothing else to hide from you except one thing I still have not told you."
YC : (pulls back from KC and looks at him with concern) "What is it??"
KC : (pulls out from his shirt a pair of bunny shoes) "I have yet to give these bunny shoes back to you. I want you to wear them from now on and never take them off. Will you ?? "
YC : "Does that mean ... ??"
KC : "Yes, of course. After out date that night, I finally realize who my heart belong to..and it has always been you. "
YC : (smiles with tears in her eyes) "Yes , yes I will never take them off again."
THe couple smiled at each other happily knowing that now they will find happiness in their secluded lives together.
10 years later, KC & YC pretend to be commoners dressed in simple clothing went into LSM kingdom to find peace, happiness, and wealth in the kingdom that LSM has reigned for the last 10 years.
The End

How do you like my TOB2 ending Suki ?? hehehehe